Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I’ve made two plans

Plan 1

Introduction:- Agree.

Paragraph 1:- Children spend quality time with teachers. Although they spend more time with parents at home but this time is not as productive as the small amount of time spent with teachers.

Paragraph 2:- Teachers are role models for students. They are scholars in action. They not only influence intellectually but socially. Students inadvertently follow their teachers behaviour too.

Paragraph 3:- Teachers are better than parents academically.

Conclusion

Plan 2

Introduction:- Disagree

Paragraph 1:- Children spend more time with parents as compared to teachers

Paragraph 2:- Parents know their children more than anyone else

Paragraph 3:- In times of adversity, children depend on their parents

Paragraph 4:- Children depend on parents for finances

Conclusion