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Friday, January 20, 2012

Sample answer for IELTS letter of 7th Jan 2012, India


You are taking a business course at a college. As a part of the course every student has to choose a company to study and visit. Write a letter to the manager of the company
-          Tell what course you are doing
-          Why you are interested in your company
-          Suggest arrangements for the visit

Dear Sir,

My name is Kiran. I am a final year student of ‘Master of business Administration’ at State University of New York at Buffalo. I am writing this letter to request you to allow me to visit and study your company ‘Bell Enterprises’ as a part of my course.


I am interested in your company because I have heard a lot about your company. Many of my seniors have done their training in your company and they have told me how the owners of your company started from scratch a few years ago and how they have grown their small firm into a mighty empire with 10,000 workers in just five years. Your auto parts are excellent quality wise but just having good quality products is not enough for any company to succeed. It has been possible only because of your sound business acumen and your employer employee relation.  

I would like to start my study project in your company during the summer break which is of three months. I would like to spend a few days in each department and study the work pattern there as part of my assignment. I assure you I would be an asset to your company during my stay. Please let me know if I can start my project in May, this year and if you provide paid accommodation for trainees like me.

Hoping for a positive response from your side.

Yours faithfully,
Kiran

5 comments:

  1. I have no words to say but your work ,dedication & in time support is highly appreciable.
    Could you please write an essay taht was asked as task 2 togetehr with above mentioned letter.
    "Rich people should open the doors to opportunities by helping others.Do you agree or disagree?
    thanks
    Naheed

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  2. I am not sure but the style seems to me semi-formal but this is a formal letter. I am not a teacher I am a student. I may be wrong :)
    Thank you very much
    Huseyin

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    1. According to the question, I have tried to make it formal. The letter is written according to the requirement of the question

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  3. Relly this blog is full of information for IELTS preparation...Thanks Kiran to make it. i would like to help little bit more...can you write following letter...

    Letter # 1
    Writing Task 1 (a letter)
    You are planning to join a part time course and have come to know about an organization that can sponsor your studies. Write a letter to the head of the organization mentioning
    - your educational background and work experience,
    - how the organization can help you to do this part time course,
    - what is the benefit of doing this course.

    Writing Task 1 (a letter)
    A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
    Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
    • explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
    • tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
    • say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening

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  4. hi i have read your letters and essay on you site but i need more letters about letters to family and friends could u please help me with this .my E mail is kawaldhota@yahoo.co.in

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